Friday, November 7, 2008
"The ecstacy of failure"
My eyes set on the trembling waters;
Glistening with rays falling on it,
Made up of infinite drops;
Wish,i can count it?
Flowing air are full of tensions;
Rummaging my long locks;
Running like hell;
Wish,I can catch it?
Intensity ,rage ,anger are visible;
In the glaring fire;
Full of revenge,it can wake havoc,
Wish ,i can feel what it is made up of?
Breathing ,life giving,best friend;
Thats our beautiful earth,
Having rebirth every second;
Metamorphosis is its basic behavior;
Wish,I can see it?
Full of ambitions,i seek to know my queries;
But its far from possible;
Still i have no regrets.
Sometimes the universal law can be broken;
Not always failure gives you joy.
But in this case it surely gives!!!!!
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this is cool
ReplyDeleteI'm speechless... don't even know what to say...
ReplyDeleteI adore this poem. it is amazing just the way it is . . .
a few sentences luk gramatically incorrect bt dats jst my opinion.... i'm tryng 2 b critical here... bt gud dfintly gud!
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